This pamphlet is okay, as manifestos go. I felt most of the arguments were made well-enough; some better than others. I felt the appendix of religious scripture was superfluous to this pamphlet. A separate pamphlet could be made, and with a wider and better selection of scripture, with commentary included. As with many self-published books or pamphlets, this one suffered from punctuation and other errors that writers often overlook when editing their own material.